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Name: MAHMOUD
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My sins


Wednesday,Apr 23 2008, 04:30:56 PM
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My sins

 

 

Standing up there

At the edge of hell

Watching sunset

In a sea of blood

 

Screams are so loud

Each moment sun moves down

Sinking in a sea of blood

Sea of my sins

 

I have made that sea

From those hearts I broke

Now I have to live

With all those screams

 

Sun is almost vanished

My heart beats getting slow

My feet can not hold me

And start to fall

 

Moment till the sunset

Screams are getting louder

My ears hear it

My heart shattered from it

 

The sun is my heart

And it's reaching the end

 

Screams are higher

And sun has only seconds

Looking around me

Searching for one, to help

 

I see a face, with a hand

Sinking in that sea

Is that could be possible

Can this be true?

 

No time to lose

I do my best to move

Getting down from the edge

And take a big dive into the sea

 

I can not see anything

And I have to breathe

I swim back to surface

But I can not reach it

 

No one there

And hearing laughs

Kind of evil laughs

Is it Devil?

 

No, it's my sins

They should get back to me

Some day I did them

And today, they revenge

 

So my breath getting slow

No more air inside

Only blood filling me

With one idea in my head

Wishing for their forgiveness

To stay in grave in peace

 

 

 

But I can not imagine they would……….

 

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4/23/2008 7:06 PM
ANAS, 18
Saint Petersburg
Russian Federation

nice 1 brother :)

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