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Thursday,Nov 19 2009, 02:03:51 PMJoey & Myrtle

The tortoise and the turtle
were named Joey and Myrtle
and though they were cousins of a sort
not from the same shop were they bought

Now it happened that on one sunny day
Myrtle came to the pond where Joey lay
basking in the sun to warm before a swim
but when she came into view he had another whim

Being slightly less than full of guile
he promptly came to chat with her a while
and was not too shy to nudge her shiny shell
for that she liked him he thought that he could tell

But when he asked her to come for a swim
her answer quite deeply horrified him
“Swimming is simply not good for my skin”
at which he blinked with mouth silently gaping

"Not swim?" he finally found the breath to gasp
"then how do you fish" he took her to task
she responded "No fish is in my diet"
"I just eat salad stuff, you should try it"

Such a thing Joey had never known
so he went to swim just on his own
to contemplate this strange diet Myrtle chose
eating weeds that would have tickled his nose

Where is the fun in that he thought
I enjoy chasing till fish are caught
but those salads seem like weeds to me
and have no movement I can see

All this time Myrtle was chomping leaves
under the pleasant shelter of some trees
a mixed salad left out for her to munch
when her owner was preparing lunch........

(c)Rhumour
November 18th 2009


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Wednesday,Nov 18 2009, 02:32:12 PMRhyming Couplets

Rhyming couplets - an old short form of poetry that I've been playing with recently, these are examples I've penned in the iambic pentameter format (10 syllables per line) as used by early exponents like John Donne.

The Game

All will be told at the cards final fold ...

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Saturday,Nov 14 2009, 09:13:12 PMLike Dreamers Do...

Like Dreamers Do

My pillows are so crumpled
My bed in such a mess
It's time to do the laundry ...

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sweetgracia2001
grace 48, Philippines
Hello Dave, Thanks so much for sharing with me that wonderful poem. I appreciate it so much. You;re so sweet. Take good care and God Bless you in everything that you do.

6 days agoRe: thanks

Rhumour
DaveVerified Zorpian 58, Spalding, United Kingdom
Hi Grace - you are welcome, glad you enjoyed it!

There are a great many more of my poems on my journal pages here covering a wide range of themes - enjoy :)

Best wishes

Dave, aka Rhumour

6 days agoRe: Re: thanks

sweetgracia2001
grace 48, Philippines
Hi Dave,

Thanks again, I will be interested to read all of your poems.
More power to you.

Grace

11/8/2009 5:21 PMDiscover Islam

Hurricane3
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11/8/2009 2:03 PMHello

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11/5/2009 6:58 AMHi Dave

ahlyn78
ahlyn 31, Philippines
I like your poem, I am a Filipina. And I want to learn how to write a poem. My uncle told me that he can see the poetic side of me, its just that I don't know it yet.

11/1/2009 12:23 AMHello

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Jessica 23, Senegal
Hello
My name is Jessica,i saw your profile today and became intrested in you,i will also like to know you more,and if you can send an email to my email address,i will give you my pictures here is my email address (Jessicabahi 25@ yah o o.com) I believe we can move from here! Awaiting for your mail to my email address above.
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Please email me on (Jessicabahi 25@ yah o o.com) for more explaination.

10/30/2009 10:35 AMme:)

lorik000
larisa 28, Ukraine


You are very interesting man and I would like to invite you for a
private communication, what will you reply?

10/31/2009 6:30 AMRe: me:)

Rhumour
DaveVerified Zorpian 58, Spalding, United Kingdom
I'm a very open person so we can chat here on zorpia.......

10/26/2009 9:17 AMHELLO DAVE...SOMETHING FOR U TO MAKE U SMILE...

loidarsilva
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HAPPINESS IS ENHANCED BY OTHERS,
BUT IT DOES NOT DEPEND UPON OTHERS.

SO, TAKE TIME OUT TO LAUGH,
BECAUSE IT IS THE MUSIC OF THE SOUL.

GOD BLESS U AND TAKE CARE.

WISHING THAT YOUR NEW WEEK BE FILLED
WITH LOVE, FUN, AND PEACE.

LOVE,
LOID

MANY SCAMMERS HERE HUH!!!

10/23/2009 4:38 PMhi

tina4u123
tina 23, Senegal

My name is hope, Dear i get interested of your profile at write me at my private email here(hope4johnson@yahoo.com)i have something important to tell you, also for you to know me well and i will send you my pictures directly to you there.
lots of love.
hope! (hope4johnson@yahoo.com)

10/23/2009 5:45 PMRe: hi

Rhumour
DaveVerified Zorpian 58, Spalding, United Kingdom
The answer is still no - as I have told you before. I do not reply via yahoo to anyone - thats the scammers technique and as you persist in asking I can only conclude you are involved in illicit activities since this message system is more than adequate for legitimate purposes and is more secure too............

10/23/2009 7:31 AMHELLO!!!

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2Yuliya 29, Liverpool, United Kingdom
Hello! My name is Yuliya!!!I search for serious relations!
I with impatience look forward to hearing from you.
Mine The address yuliya111love@yahoo.com
I wish to know the truth you more and to hope,
that you answer my letter!
Please do not forget about me.
Your new friend from Russia,
Yuliya!!!

10/23/2009 12:27 PMRe: HELLO!!!

Rhumour
DaveVerified Zorpian 58, Spalding, United Kingdom
As with all such messages I will point out that I clearly state in my profile that I will not allow communications via yahoo and other external mail systems.

Do not imagine for a moment that I would regard your message as being sincere - or appropriate! This site is a social network - all messages should be made within this system to avoid scamming and other illicit activities.

10/23/2009 7:26 AMHELLO DAVE..HOW R U TODAY?

loidarsilva
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WHEN U NEED TO SMILE,
THINK OF A SPECIAL FRIEND.
REMEMBER THE HAPPY DAYS,
OF A FRIENDSHIP THAT WILL NEVER END.

GOD BLESS U AND TAKE CARE.

HAVE A RELAXING AND WORRY FREE WEEKEND.

LOVE,
LOID
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