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Wednesday,Nov 7 2007, 05:47:09 AMDown Under :))
i read ur umm.. yeah that and i stole your thoughts and put it in words. hehehe
the carnival bellowed with mounting glee
soo gay and happy for all to see
the lights turn up in vivid glare
with rides and wonder booths of fare
then in the dead of the night it close
no trace of smile it weakly doze
all merriment gone in fuzzy haze
as reality sunk-in in tedious glaze
creeping cold of icy snakes drew fast
as courage left fair alone to last
groping sadness fill the air
bewildered of the vulnerability it bear
yearning for an egress for this
hoping for someone to be there at least
to enter its gates and see for real
the anguished soul behind the wheel
Guestbook
11/11/2007 2:50 PMHi do u hav that habit. Wow
mukesh
21, India
11/8/2007 3:08 PM*clears throat and shouts*
FoundMyStar
25, Going to leave the, United Kingdom
I like, I like, I like!!!!!!!!!!
I will share with you mine one day! lol
I will share with you mine one day! lol
11/8/2007 3:21 PMRe: Re: *clears throat and shouts*
FoundMyStar
25, Going to leave the, United Kingdom
haha, I will email you something that I wrote for Chloe, I don't wanna post it on my page because it is for her but seeing that I gave you a rather limited critical review of yours it is only fair that you are allowed to do the same! lol
11/8/2007 3:52 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: *clears throat and shouts*
FoundMyStar
25, Going to leave the, United Kingdom
lol *hugs* I sent it, see what you think!
11/8/2007 5:46 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: *clears throat and shouts*
desire
24, Philippines
*hugs back* :))
umm.. its not as u claimed it was.. it was far more better. :P
u are a good one brother, u claim i was good.. well, i think.. u endow me too much credit.. ur work is full of emotion. and the words were nothing ordinary. hmm.. u were too modest! haha
umm.. its not as u claimed it was.. it was far more better. :P
u are a good one brother, u claim i was good.. well, i think.. u endow me too much credit.. ur work is full of emotion. and the words were nothing ordinary. hmm.. u were too modest! haha
11/8/2007 6:10 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: *clears throat and shouts*
FoundMyStar
25, Going to leave the, United Kingdom
I am British, I am supposed to be modest! lol...Thank you again for the complements!
11/9/2007 5:41 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: *clears throat and shouts*
desire
24, Philippines
I am a Filipino, I am supposed to be .. umm .. what am I supposed to be?? hahaha
nway, ur welcome.. keep writing. haha :D
nway, ur welcome.. keep writing. haha :D
11/9/2007 6:49 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: *clears throat and shouts*
FoundMyStar
25, Going to leave the, United Kingdom
You are supposed to be strong, proud and beautiful! That's what I know so far! lol
11/7/2007 11:07 AMwow
s(hrey)t00pi
19, United States
...you are just.........WOW
11/7/2007 6:38 PMRe: wow
Robee Angela
33, Philippines
yes she is that and you are not the first to say that....but she wont believe u still.....
11/7/2007 7:21 PMRe: Re: wow
s(hrey)t00pi
19, United States
i didnt say that because..i wasn't kidding and can you spank robee for me ?
11/7/2007 7:39 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: wow
s(hrey)t00pi
19, United States
i will be glad to get spanked by....anyone...







11/12/2007 8:21 PMhmm