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Tuesday,Apr 15 2008, 03:48:51 AMshampoo?

dont read .. just read.

 

estranged in a frenzy of demiss

wrapped in the longetivity of time

frozen in the phase of nothing

cowered by the shrill of a sigh

quivering in the face of dusk

bailed out from the sane, lost

hail this form to the way and beyond

lo! none took heed of what took past

fast, in a deadly kill it flew

took flight to the far  and unknown

never gone, but yet to return.

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5/21/2008 3:22 AMUhhh

qqcandy
Ad Astra 92, United States
This is rather awkwardly worded and seems to serve more faithfully the ideals of philosophy rather than poetry(though even there there is lacking a certain utility and a sequential, logical delivery). Still love you though, babe.

4/16/2008 4:22 AMYo

dawnstalker
Ralphter 25, United States
Why do you have to be so fucking adorable???

4/18/2008 1:52 AMRe: Yo

brokentin
desire 24, Philippines
err.. umm.. adorable would have been fine.. but f***ing? err.. should i even say thanks?haha :)

thanks though :D

4/15/2008 11:21 AMRead with intrest xxx

mjgmjgbroo
michael Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian 58, United Kingdom
The last line is the Best .
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NEVER GONE,BUT YET TO RETURN

4/16/2008 1:30 AMRe: Read with intrest xxx

brokentin
desire 24, Philippines
hehe i wrote the whole of this devoid of intentions and emotions, now that you mentioned it.. it makes me feel like it must have been my unconscious talking.. didnt even thought it makes sense.. thanks Michael :)

4/15/2008 4:21 AMjo

biggestahole
nose 107, Morgantown, West Virginia, United States
i like

4/15/2008 4:22 AMRe: jo

brokentin
desire 24, Philippines
haha if you say you dont.. i would cut your nose!

4/15/2008 4:23 AMRe: Re: jo

biggestahole
nose 107, Morgantown, West Virginia, United States
ok..i dont

4/15/2008 4:23 AMRe: Re: Re: jo

brokentin
desire 24, Philippines
:(

4/15/2008 4:27 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: jo

biggestahole
nose 107, Morgantown, West Virginia, United States
you know i love it..i mean..your wordings are perfectly sexy..you can randomly write shi* and make it gold!

4/15/2008 4:29 AMRe: Re: Re: Re: Re: jo

brokentin
desire 24, Philippines
liar! but thanks *hugs* :D

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