hey man i had a listen 2 it, its not bad, the snare doesnt have enough emphasis over the rest of the beat, sounds a bit weak, other than that its damn good. by the way, like the scratch sample on the remix, sounds good.

ight thanx dawg! ill work on it man, bdw im young u kno ive a loooong way !! so ive time :p
i really wanna thank 4 lettin me kno

thats aiight man no worries.. uve definately got the basics done, just those few things to work on. try and find some rare samples and play with them. thats how all the mad beats are done. yeah dw man u have a while to go, you'll only get better with time. how long have u been doing it for and what software and hardware are you using?

abt 1 month & im usin FL STUDIO 7

Yeah, i use FL Studio 6.8, I made like a mini album for a projekt. Turned out alright I guess. I made a couple beats for Hostile Bone, from The Ghost Tribe which is basically a Native Canadian hip hop group.